Writing a Book – Step 4 – Revise, Rewrite, Re-edit

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Over the past few months I’ve shared my process of writing this book, All That Is, Living in the Moment for Strength & Vitality. I began with the Value of a Daily Writing Habit, and continued with Writing a Book – Step 2 – First Revision,Writing A Book- Step 3 – Editorial Advice. In Step 4, my manuscript became a book.

I began making the revisions my developmental editor suggested. As I revised and re-read the manuscript I saw my life stories, not directly related to mindfulness, gratitude and health, weakened the book’s purpose. Not only did I now have to rewrite, revise, and edit, I needed to make carefully measured chapter cuts.

Taking out the unrelated chapters significantly reduced the length of the book, necessitating expanding and adding chapters. Rewriting was a slower process than the original writing because I had to stick to my theme of living in the moment.

In this process I made the decision it is better to have a smaller book than one padded with information that doesn’t contribute to the book’s intention. This process took longer than expected because I edit as I write.

Now,the talented writer, Gary White, is reading my fully revised, rewritten, and re-edited book. He has graciously agreed to write the forward.

While I wait, I am completing the Resources chapter and designing covers. The above cover is the first of several I’ll be creating to receive your feedback. I’m using Kindle e-book cover templates from Canva.

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#52 OF 52 GIRLS

This is the last in the series of haikus and comic pin-ups collaboration. We trust you’ve enjoyed the exhibit.

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All Things Alaska #2

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August 9, 2013

Evening sun bursts through dissipating clouds

Blue sky blesses grey sky weary day

Waves roll ashore

Crows gather and convene on beach

rest on driftwood like a church congregation

caw caw cawing sings out

Air a cool fan on face

blushes in warming sun

walk on Bishop Beach

in Homer’s Old Town

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Enjoy this next to last of comic and poetry collaboration.

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Guest Blogging South of the Border

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My first guest post blog invitation came from Juan Manuel Rodriguez Bocanegra, creator of Haki Storytelling. Bocanegra is a business storyteller and lives in Colombia, South America. He connected with me on Linkedin and blogs about storytelling for business. The blog also features writers from around the world, such as Ameen Haque of the Storywallahs in India.

When Juan invited me to write a guest blog I was surprised. After reading several guest posts, I offered to write a series about how I became Skywalker Storyteller. Juan translated my blog into Spanish with the following introduction.

KNOW THE ORIGINS 

It is clear storytelling can not be converted into a step guide or a linear process because once we do that we lose authenticity and sincerity when telling our tale. Even though it is good to define our starting point and to know where we came from, we need to understand our origins. 

In the next piece, Skywalker Storyteller offers us a personal life story, where she narrates her origins. Like she said to me, “People want to know where a person came from.” The piece is really well written and has some powerful descriptions. After reading a couple of lines you get completely hooked to the narration. With that being said I leave you with her story.

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Black beauty and poetry. Enjoy.

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