Free Write Friday – Wordplay
O.K. it’s Sunday, I’m late, but this was one I did have to think about and find the time to write – been way too busy. Here is the prompt as Kellie Elmore wrote it “I was given this prompt once: to take an ordinary task/object and make it sexy. To write about my selected subject in an intimate way, playing on words so that the reader would be unaware (and maybe blush a bit). I am passing this challenge along to you. Think you are up for it? You can always reveal your subject at the end OR you can leave us to guess, which in my opinion, is way more fun!”
My love sought me for years
over journeys into darkness
through miles of lostness.
His embrace was beyond
any touch I had ever known
his kiss filled me with a comfort
that never vanishes
his touch is beyond gentle
into a joy that challenges
every moment of living
My love is the one
I searched for years
stopping at others doors
only to find tears
When I found him
at first I did not know
He was just there
holding me so
with his words
And then I knew
I took refuge
and search no more.
Tender and sweet, Sky. It’s a wonderful thing to write about love, especially the one sticks in our hearts and makes us feel special. This is gold: “I took refuge and search no more.”
Thanks, Uzo.
Thank you for joining, it has been a pleasure to read your posts.
Likewise.
Oh my gosh! I have no idea! I have read twice and cannot figure it out. Is that bad? Maybe it’s good? lol! You definitely gave passion to your subject and the longing thrives in your words. Great job! 🙂
Don’t tell yet…I wana see if anyone else guesses 😉
Well, I may have cheated a little but the last two lines were “For my love fills my days
to walk the Buddhist way.”
I’m projecting here, but it sounds like you finally found a comfortable pair of headphones.
You’re funny, see my answer to Kellie.
Fell lost, Sky, your tough, I revealed mine… Your adventure to seeking him out, and then not knowing, but that he was just there… Another clue please, I have no idea, but maybe a little, I’ll have to come back and read again 🙂 I need to think about it..
See my answer to Kellie.