Category: Art, Beauty, Consciousness, Creativity, Death, Haiku, Poetry, spirituality, Writing
Tags: art, Beauty, creativity, death, Haiku, Literature, Poetry, Skywalker Storyteller, writing
Skywalker, This is such a meaningful and lovely haiku!
I’m understanding haiku, the two thoughts juxtaposed by a punctuating phrase between.
Don’t let my haikus be an example of what a haiku is. According to another blogger, I regularly break classical haiku rules. The one thing I’ve been doing is using the syllable/line format – 5-7-5. It gives me some discipline and forces me to concentrate on language use.
I wondered about that. Thanks for clearing it up for me. But, I think your haiku about the moth led to the flame had the desired punch. Also, the sound of chimes contrasted with silence. Very nice.
Absolute serenity oozes through reading this wonderful piece…!:)
Wonderful piece. So fluid with meaning. Wonerful
The ending is reflects a happy and optimistic perspective. Love it!
This one lots of people like. Thanks for sharing your thoughts.
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