Wonder Haiku 32

Wonder Haiku 32

11 Comments on “Wonder Haiku 32”

  1. I’m understanding haiku, the two thoughts juxtaposed by a punctuating phrase between.

    • Don’t let my haikus be an example of what a haiku is. According to another blogger, I regularly break classical haiku rules. The one thing I’ve been doing is using the syllable/line format – 5-7-5. It gives me some discipline and forces me to concentrate on language use.

      • I wondered about that. Thanks for clearing it up for me. But, I think your haiku about the moth led to the flame had the desired punch. Also, the sound of chimes contrasted with silence. Very nice.

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