Waves Haiku 25
Soft cottony clouds
gracefully brush mountain peaks
sky watches their dance
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I’ve noticed an interesting trait in your poetry, which is to insert yourself third-person. It’s a cool signature quality.
Actually, that really wasn’t supposed to be a reference to me but to the sky in the photo – I do do that however in my ghazals because it’s part of the style. Thanks for reading and commenting.
I hope you are OK with me reading it the way I originally saw it, even now knowing your intent. I’m postmodern in that respect.
I feel poetry is fully open to the readers interpretation.:)
Hello! Thank you for stopping by to visit and comment. One of these days I will work on learning Haiku.. (:
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